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Post by Madison McAdams on Aug 24, 2007 12:43:04 GMT -5
haha
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Post by iflippenlovedean on Sept 8, 2007 13:34:58 GMT -5
dude LOVE the fanfic. for your first time it's pretty good(:
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 10, 2007 6:24:09 GMT -5
thanx. glad you like it! i think imma update tomorrow sometime if i have time! well bye everyone. sorry its taking me so long to update. ive been so busy! but thanx for understanding! byeee
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 11, 2007 6:33:57 GMT -5
"So Sam is alright, right?" Dean asked waiting for an answer. "I dont know, i told you, everything happened so fast." said Colby. "But i think he's alright he's just kept somewere." said Colby. Colby placed her hand on Deans shoulder, "I'm sure he's ok. i'm sure of it" she said trying to reassure Dean. "Well i hope your right." said Dean. Colby just exchanged a look at Dean and they continued on their walk to the house. Dean finally broke the silence, "Should i break down the door or do you think it will..well you know explode." "I think it will be ok, but just to make sure throw something at it." said Colby getting a little worried now. Dean went over and picked up some old piece of wood that was on the side on the house stacked in a pile. He threw it at the door. The door just went all in to pieces it was so old, there was no need to knock it down. "Well that worked out nicely" said Dean. "Yea" said Colby. "Lets go." said Dean. They walked into the house. It was all quiet, except for the creaking of the stairs. "Does anything look familiar from your vision?" Dean asked. But Colby was already walking in another direction.
k thats all for now sorry so short
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 11, 2007 17:32:03 GMT -5
"Colby!" Dean whispered. "What?" said Colby. "I'm over here." Dean flashed his light to see her better. She had found some hallway that was really long, but seemed to of lead to a door. "This way" she motioned. "Are you sure this is the right way?" asked Dean. "I'm not real sure" said Colby. They got about halfway when the floor broke loose. They both fell down onto the bottom of the floor. Clearly they had found a much harder way to the basement. "Are you alright?" asked Dean. "Yea i think so, my arm just hurts a bit." said Colby, "but i'll be fine." "Now were do we go?" said Dean flashing his light from left to right. "I dont know, we need to find some door or hallway." "Do you think this is the basement?" Colby asked. "Could be." said Dean. "This way." said Dean he had found a path they could take. "Maybe this way will take us back to the top." said Dean. "I hope so." said Colby. They kept walking, but it seemed like they were walking in circles. It took so long. Dean finally broke the silence. "So..when you ummm...well..when you saw me die.." "I was freaked out." Colby finished. "I was really scared. I had never had nightmares like that before. It's just like they came out of no were, it was really weird." said Colby. "But im glad your ok now." said Colby exchanging a look with Dean. Dean quickly switched the subject. "Do you hear that?" "Hear what?" asked Colby. "Listen" said Dean. You could barely hear but someone was yelling. It sounded like Sam. "It's Sam!" said Dean. "This way." "Dean wait. How do you know for sure its' him?" asked Colby. "I know my own brother when i hear him." said Dean. "DEAN!DEAN!DEAN!" you could hear off in the distance. Colby didn't want to stop Dean from finding his brother. She was only here to keep Dean alive. "Im coming Sam!" said Dean "Im coming!"
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 11, 2007 17:34:43 GMT -5
Hope you like the 2 updates. I might add more tonight. if not i'll probably add some tomorrow. so yea. but i hope ya'll are liking it! thanx for all the comments!
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 12, 2007 6:29:20 GMT -5
NEXT UPDATE...
"Im coming Sam." Dean repeated. Dean followed the voice of his brother. They finally made it back upstairs. "Thank God, we got out of that basement." said Colby. "You're telling me." said Dean. The yelling stopped. "SAM!SAM!" said Dean. No answer. "What the hell?, i know i heard him." said Dean. "I heard him too." said Colby. The screams for Dean had lead them to a door. "The sound did seem to come from here..right?" asked Colby. "Yea." said Dean. He got ready to open it, but i was locked. "Lets just kick it down then." said Dean. "Yea ok. but be careful." said Colby. "Im gonna go look over here this way." said Colby. Dean quickly jerked his head and looked at Colby. "Are you kidding me. Youre staying right here with me. It's not safe in here." said Dean. There was a little silence between them. "Oh alright." said Colby. "Good. Now lets get into this room." said Dean. Colby stood a few feet away to let Dean break down the door. 'BAM' the door fell to the ground. Dean ran into the room, Colby followed. Nothing. "What the hell?" said Dean. "Where is he?" asked Colby. "I dont know." said Dean. "SAM!SAM!SAM!" yelled Dean. "SAM!" he yelled again. "Maybe he's not even here." said Colby. Dean just gave her a look. Someone walked in the room. "Dean? Colby?" it was Sam. "Sam thank god. Were the hell were you?" "We were looking everywere for you." "I was outside." said Sam. "What are you talking about?, we heard you yelling for Dean." said Colby. "I never yelled for Dean." said Sam now looking rather confused. Dean and Colby just exchanged looks. "Well lets find this damn demon now that we're all here together." said Dean quickly changing the subject. Sam walked ahead of Colby and Dean. Colby grabbed Dean by the shoulder and whispered to him, "Somethings not right with Sam. I know what i saw in my vision." "I believe you" said Dean. "I dont think this is Sam either." They continued to walk.
Hope you liked the update. i might update more tonight idk. but let me know what you think. i think the title of this fanfic will be "LOST". it just came to me out of the blue. but enjoy. and leave me some comments! thanx!
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 12, 2007 18:50:57 GMT -5
I'll update more tomorrow! =] thanx for reading! =]
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 17, 2007 6:24:09 GMT -5
I'll update asap. im working on the nxt update right now! so there will b an update soon! thanx for reading!
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Sept 28, 2007 6:18:22 GMT -5
hi all. wow its been awhile since ive come to the boards! sorry its been so long. ive been rather busy w/homework, and other things as well and i just havent found the time to come on here. but i think i'll be able to come on in the mornings when i can.
im still gonna post another update to the fanfic ASAP! but ive been so busy i havent had the time. but dont worry there is still more to the fanfic! thanx for understanding.
-sam
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Nov 5, 2007 7:27:24 GMT -5
ok so ive noticed i havent been updating like i said i would...sorry for this..i havent been on in who knows how long..but please bear with me. i'll have it updated as soon as i can! thanx
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Post by x0jensenx0 on May 5, 2008 16:42:59 GMT -5
ok and once again i havent been on here in a while. more like 6 months!!! ahhh i cant believe its been that long since ive been here. ive been swamped w/a lot of homework this semester, and i have all these projects im having to do. its crazy! but i thank everyone for understanding. im still really sorry that i havent updated my fanfic in a while. like i said i would. hopefully i will have one soon. i have it, but i just got to find the time to type it. =] but i guess im gonna go for the time being, and go browse around the boards since i havent been here in a while, got some catching up to do. =] hope that everyone is doing good! and thanx again for understanding! talk to everyone later!
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Jun 6, 2008 8:43:41 GMT -5
YES!! IM FINALLY UPDATING!!! phew took long enough eh. lol =] -----------------------------------------------------------
The three of them continued to walk through the house. There was no way for them to get across the room, from were Dean & Colby had broken the floor. "What happened here" Sam asked when they walked it. "Oh, that..." Dean started, "It was there when we got here." Colby finished. "Oh" said Sam. They continued walking. "Maybe we should split up." Sam suggested. "Are you kidding me!" said Dean, "I'm not letting you out of my sight any more tonight." "Wait Dean, maybe it's not such a bad idea." Colby said. "What?" "If you think about it we could cover more ground if we split up." Colby said finishing, and giving Dean that 'we gotta find the real sam look'. "Oh. alright, we'll split up then, we'll meet back here in 4 hours" "Ok." said Sam, he was already going in another direction. "Be careful" Dean yelled to Sam. "Got it under control." said Sam off in the distance. "Now lets get to looking for Sam" said Colby. "Yeah i agree" said Dean in agreement. They had been walking in the house, outside of the house, for nearly 2 hours and still hadn't found anything. It was starting to seem like they would never find Sam. "Maybe.." Colby said breaking the long silence. "Maybe, the Sam we saw was the real Sam" "NO!" yelled Dean. "I know my brother better than anyone, you dont know anything about Sam!" He was getting a little bit close to Colby's face. She didnt like this at all. "I know i dont know Sam, im only here to keep your dumb ass alive" "Well im fine, so maybe you should just leave, i dont need you any way" Dean said. "Maybe i will, dont come crying to me, when you cant find Sam, and your lying dead somewere" Colby stared at Dean. They were nose to nose. (do i sense tension) =],,, "Whatever i cant deal with this right now." Dean turned around and continued walking. This hunt seemed to be going down the drain.
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Jun 6, 2008 9:00:12 GMT -5
"Im sorry." said Dean. "For what?" said Colby, they were now both sitting in the hotel. (they had decided to take a break from the hunt & do some research at the hotel, but Sam wanted to keep searching at the house) "For acting like such a dumb ass." "Oh. its fine." said Colby, now searching through the internet on her laptop, sitting on the bed. "No, its not fine, i shouldnt of gotten that angry at you, so im sorry." said Dean. "Like i said its fine, did you find anything." Colby asked while switching the subject at the same time. "I've got nothing, you?" "Nothing." "I think you're probably right..about Sam." "Oh." then all of sudden Colby broke down on the floor and was having another vision. This one she could see what was happening, it wasent going to fast, she could see it now. It was her when she was a little girl, she was out on her swing set with her mom. "COLBY!COLBY!" Dean is yelling to her, but Colby couldnt hear. She wanted to talk to her mom, but she couldnt, there was no way that her mom could hear her. "COLBY!COLBY!" Dean continued to yell. Then all of a sudden she saw the yellow eyed demon in the back ground from behind the swing set. She returned to reality. "COLBY! COLBY!, can you hear me?" said Dean, getting a little bit worried. "Dean" Colby said weakly. "Yeah im here, im here." said Dean. "Are you ok?, what happened?" asked Dean. "I..I..saw my mom." "Your mom?, isnt she.." "Yes" "Then how did you.." "I dont know, i just did,...and right before my vision was over i seen the yellow eyed demon." Just then Sam walks in the door. "Whoah, what happened here." He seen Dean holding on to Colby on the floor. "She had a vision, she saw the yellow eyed demon" "Well that can't be good." said Sam, just then his eyes turned that yellow color.
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Post by x0jensenx0 on Jun 6, 2008 9:12:53 GMT -5
"No." said Dean. "You get the hell out of my brother." Dean was now standing up. "Dean whats wrong." Colby asked still sounding some what weak. "Nothing its ok." trying to reassure her. "I dont know, i kinda like it in this body." said Sam. Dean suddenly pulls out the Colt. "What do you think your gonna do with that, you kill me, you kill Sammy." "I know." Dean reacts and shoots Sam in the leg. Sam falls to the ground screaming. Suddenly the thick cloud of black smoke escapes from Sam, and out of the room. "SAM!, SAM!" Dean was trying to wake Sam. "Dean?" "Yeah its me." "What happened." "Dont worry, just promise me you'll never let that damn demon inside of you again." "Yeah i promise." Colby was now walking again, and not so weak. "Hey Sam." she said. Dean looked up at her, and said thank you. "Lets get you cleaned up" said Dean. After a few hours, Dean and Sam started packing up. Colby walks out to Dean at the car. "So." said Colby. "So." Dean repeated. "Im glad that Sam is ok." "Yeah he'll be fine." They exchanged a look, and then Colby went forward and kissed Dean. "I'll see ya around." said Colby. "Yeah...im sure we'll meet again." "Yeah me too." said Colby. "Sam you ready to go" Dean yelled out to Sam. "Yeah coming." "See ya Colby" said Sam. "Bye." said Colby. Dean gave Colby one last look, then cranked the Impala, and headed out the drive way, onto another exciting hunt.
THE END ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- so how did everyone like it. i know its not my best fanfic, hey its only my first one. im still a beginner. lol =] well i hope everyone enjoyed reading. and hopefully i'll be starting another one here soon, but idk. thanx again for reading!! -sam =]
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